Monday, November 22, 2010

An Unexpected Visitor

3 comments:

Anonymous said...

Ranger sounds like an amazing dog! I love how your illustrations match your creative writing. Keep up the incredible effort! -Ms. Rhoads

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Ms.Lane said...

Evan - Your story is exciting - especially the part where you use your rubber band shooter with the snake. It's obvious in the story how much you and ranger care for each other. The words you chose for descriptions give your story strong voice.